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I wrote this song, tell me what you think

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Joined: 04/17/2010

I would run for you
To save your life
I would crawl for you
To give you time
I would cry for you
To make you mine

I would cry a thunderstorm
I would be another form
I would live with you forever
Do anything to make this better
I would cry, I would cry
I would cry, I would cry

I would love only you
Just give me the right
I would be with you
And never start a fight

Refrain x1

I would run, I would crawl
I would cry, I'd give it all
Just to be with you, just to be with you
I would cry, I would cry

*continue with I would cry line for a period of time, while it fades away into the repeat of the refrain*

Refrain x1

So tell me what you think
Just wondering who liked it or not
So send me a message
I was really in the mood when I wrote this
So yeah, it may not be good or whatever you think
But it was what I was feeling

Joined: 04/17/2010

Your song was awesome i think if some people read it they will really think someone is always out there and their searching for you.

Good Job,

Joined: 04/17/2010

you did a good job on this song.keep up the good work.

Joined: 04/17/2010

hi i'm writing a musical,and would like to know if i could write music to it and use your song in the movie.i promise your name would be as who wrote it in the credits,and i would only have the rights as to sing and all.whadaya say?

Lola Akram23 (not verified)

i like the words that you used and how u arranged it, it doesn't sound boring or cliche and overall it's a very fine song